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This afternoon while eating pizza after class I started writting again. I seem to be doing this in fits and starts.
The scene I´m currently forcing myelf to write is "Jayne goes to the brothel".
I can´t even say it´s the "Jayne at the brothel" because I just know I´ll need a break between the two scenes.
Have sneaking suspicion that I don´t describe as much as I should.
Think my dialoue might be better though.
Of course, thinking back on the fic I read last night, I suck and should have all writing utensils confiscated. There might be some godawful crap out there, but there´s gold too.
The scene I´m currently forcing myelf to write is "Jayne goes to the brothel".
I can´t even say it´s the "Jayne at the brothel" because I just know I´ll need a break between the two scenes.
Have sneaking suspicion that I don´t describe as much as I should.
Think my dialoue might be better though.
Of course, thinking back on the fic I read last night, I suck and should have all writing utensils confiscated. There might be some godawful crap out there, but there´s gold too.
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Date: 2006-03-09 03:48 am (UTC)I LOVE this story!