The tide that left and never came back*

Little visible progress today in terms of plot, because most of my word count went to extending two scenes and adding in one important detail. Once that was done, I couldn't bring myself to start the angstily epic Chip and Icarus Talk About Stuff (And the Angel Mopes) scene, so I wrote an Agatha flashback instead. It's the second flashback, and neither were Chip's, which is a change from TFSB, and I kind of like the idea of getting out of Chip's space.

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11753 / 50000 words. 24% done!


* Episode title, One Tree Hill